The Five Senses Challenge (Open to all 61 JWTALK Writers)

[Friends just call me Ross]

I thought it might be fun to challenge the whole lot of us Creative Writers

to come up with either a poem, or a short essay,

on how each of our five senses (sight, hearing, smell, taste and touch) will be affected

upon our arrival into Jehovah's NEW WORLD.

 

The only 'rule' is to include the PARADISE effect on all five senses.

 

We are all winners...or, at least, we soon will be, when we will no longer have to IMAGINE

what it will be like, because, what we imagine will be a REALITY.  💜👍 

Edited February 18, 2022 by Friends just call me Ross

[New World Explorer]

I see the vision

I hear voices

Is it real? Is this possible?

I smell those perfect donuts

Finally tasting masterpiece

Oh, the donut tree!

Who would expect you in a New World? 

Can I touch your branches to see if your are real? 

 

I see the vision

I hear voices ... honey time to wake up! 

We have moving to do

Perfect house is finally ready for us

 

I see no vision anymore

I do not hear voices

but I smell perfect breakfast!

 

 

 

 

[surfergirl]

No longer do we need to worry about updating our prescription for eyesight.

No longer will we have to have to worry about dentures & eating mash. Our taste for that bacon won't hurt our teeth.

Everything is a delight to ears. The sweet sounds of 🐦 birds and running water .

The Heat of the 🌞☀️  will warm us nicely. 

The Cool breeze under the Figtree whilst we sit munching on Strawberries and enjoying Some Fine Red knowing we've been able to enjoy our gardens and not losing it to Wild wings and Floods. 

No Sounds of the Emergency Services and Setting of the Dogs creating a mind blowing headache.

At last we are Free.

At last we are finally home.

At last no more broken promises. At last we have a Sweet sound to rest our eyes. 

At last the niggling aches and groans have truly disappeared.

At last we can pay that Scaly Croc. We are no on his menu tonight.

Let's go swimming. 

Have fun. See you soon 💖😘

Edited March 16, 2022 by surfergirl